The comic was ruined (in my opinion) by some serious editing problems. Here’s my fixed version.
– The ending was placed in it’s proper place, meaning at the end of the comic.
– Time anotation was removed.
– Bonbon’s speach was arranged in the proper way, without a useless split.
– I had to sacrefice the gradient effect of the background outside the frames for a full black one.
– Comic sans from Bonbon’s speach replaced by a less obnoxious font.
All credits goes to the original artist, of course.
What? You preffer your puchline at the START of the story?
Okay, weirdo, here’s one. The chicken is on the other side of the road and that’s it. Why the chicken crossed the road?
That make the joke so much better, right?
Forgot to tell that Bonbon’s confusion is NOT the punchline. the real punchline is that Lyra FUCKING BAGGED THE THING!
Well, that “punchline” sucked.
Dude. The punchline isn’t that Lyra stuffed something in her bag and Bon Bon is confused.
The punchline is that Lyra, being obsessed with hands, took something freaky and kidnapped the creepy stalker monkey.
The punchline is the monkey, not Bon Bon’s confusion.
What? You preffer your puchline at the START of the story?
Okay, weirdo, here’s one.
The chicken is on the other side of the road and that’s it. Why the chicken crossed the road?
That make the joke so much better, right?
Overused. No other reason.
Good job.