@CMIZAX
like I said, it’s an abridged summarization, mainly to get the general idea across. if this were part of the show canon, then much of the gaps would most likely be filled in by other episodes (mostly from one centered around Silver Spoon).
yes, i am a strange people. but hey, “strange” is in the eye of the beholder, and sometimes a good thing anyway…
I won’t say that it’s bad, or even mediocre, it’s just kind of an awkwardly made story that kind of shoehorns some things into it in a low quality sort of way.
In short: it’s not perfect, but it’s certainly not as bad as a troll fic, atleast some of the ones I found.
@smashfan666
Seriously man I’m telling you, don’t listen to these guys! They may say the writing is awful and you yourself may even have doubts, but I’ll tell you that the story surrounding this character is interesting and humorous at the same time, and makes me genuinely smile. Such simple joys are rare in life, and when something makes my day a little better (even if it is a silly story) I am grateful. So I say you should keep creating your art and share the tale of Tiara Ultima, and I promise that if you were to ever write a full length story about it I’d be an eager follower.
As for quality, maybe the criticisms are valid and its not the best, but as long as you have fun and even a few people enjoy the story, that is all that matters. Don’t forget as well that only by continues practice will you improve, so keep at it!
@smashfan666
As a 25 year old who was diagnosed as a kid with moderate autism but learned over the years how to compensate for it, I hope your writing will eventually be age-appropriate in quality and you don’t let your mental differences define you as a person or make excuses for not overcoming your flaws.
like I said, it’s an abridged summarization, mainly to get the general idea across. if this were part of the show canon, then much of the gaps would most likely be filled in by other episodes (mostly from one centered around Silver Spoon).
yes, i am a strange people. but hey, “strange” is in the eye of the beholder, and sometimes a good thing anyway…
In short: it’s not perfect, but it’s certainly not as bad as a troll fic, atleast some of the ones I found.
Seriously man I’m telling you, don’t listen to these guys! They may say the writing is awful and you yourself may even have doubts, but I’ll tell you that the story surrounding this character is interesting and humorous at the same time, and makes me genuinely smile. Such simple joys are rare in life, and when something makes my day a little better (even if it is a silly story) I am grateful. So I say you should keep creating your art and share the tale of Tiara Ultima, and I promise that if you were to ever write a full length story about it I’d be an eager follower.
As for quality, maybe the criticisms are valid and its not the best, but as long as you have fun and even a few people enjoy the story, that is all that matters. Don’t forget as well that only by continues practice will you improve, so keep at it!
thanks, man. that means a lot :)
As a 25 year old who was diagnosed as a kid with moderate autism but learned over the years how to compensate for it, I hope your writing will eventually be age-appropriate in quality and you don’t let your mental differences define you as a person or make excuses for not overcoming your flaws.
or the 1986 Transformers movie…
as an autistic 17 year old, i decidedly take only minimal offence to that…