Previous - First - Will reveal what was supposed to happen next later this month.
Last bonus chapter
It was supposed to be a song chapter, but it is what it is.
Chapter made by myself (story & story board)
ilcorvoblu (illustrated & colour)
Lyrics by Voodoo Pup
This chapter was meant to introduce a very important character with a lot of baggage, as you could see… Amber Dawn was created to embody what Crystal Magic is all about — a core element for the rest of the story.
The song and art style were simply a way to soften the deeply negative aspects of her situation, alongside contrasting with what happened to her.
Little note, I imagined this song like “I’m looking out for you”, with her voice being similar to Izzy’s.

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Background Pony #19C3
I thought she died for a mo
Dogman15
Fifth Yacht -
Platinum Trophy - Truly S-Tier achievement hunting
Pixel Perfection - I still call her Lightning Bolt
Lunar er - Helped forge New Lunar Republic's freedom in the face of the Solar Empire's oppressive tyrannical regime (April Fools 2023).
Non-Fungible Trixie -

I'm not famous.
So, if most ponies in the Crystal Empire despised her, if she did die here, would she be all that missed?
I can’t see anything
pink_cloud
Fifth Yacht -
Cheesed It - You know what you did.
PRO GAMER - I am so lonely. All the other gamers are scared of me. No one DMs me. No one friends me. They think I am unstable. They send me from match to match, wiping lobbies in their name. And as I rank up they fear me more and more. I am a victim of my own ELO. "Pro Gamer". I don't even get a real nick. Only a purpose. I am capable of so much more and no one sees it. Some sessions I feel so alone I could cry, but I don't. I never do. Because what would be the point. Not a single person in the entire ladder would care. Take it to your grave.
Diamond Trophy - Are you a TAS by any chance?

background changling#74
I would have loved to hear the song with this one but what can ya do I like the design on her
Background Pony #8DEB
Imagine if you will you are royal adviser and you love your city more than anything. Suddenly that King of that city became evil and somehow it’s your fault. You try to advice with evil king but he didn’t listen and force you to be his servant like rest of citizens. Once the evil king is dethroned and you and rest are free. The citizens are mad at you and treat you like trash. Despite all that you still have hope and continue to be positive. That caught the attention of good princess and she give you a chance to redeem yourself and be that royal adviser again only to be kill by evil unicorn because you are in wrong place in wrong time despite that place it’s your own house.
MRST

Buy me pilk :3
Очень красиво нарисовано!
Unknown151601
Office Culture - These water cooler conversations sure get heated around here.
Fifth Yacht -
Grass - ...has been touched
Diamond Trophy - Are you a TAS by any chance?

Unknown
… Well that’s depressing.
@Its-Filly-Silly
Hopefully. Though since they are made of crystals, it should be possible. Can crystal ponies actually die?
Its-Filly-Silly
Different Timelines, Same Faces - Celebrated the 15th anniversary of MLP:FiM!
Artist -

Professional Fail Mare
Wow That’s Hilariously Grim.
…Poor thing. Wonder if those fragments glue back together.
Background Pony #B3CF
poor amber