#3769336 - safe, artist:jessy, oc, oc only, oc:city lights, earth pony, adult blank flank, earth pony oc, female, looking at you, mare, needs more compression, open mouth, open smile, picture for breezies, smiling, standing, thumbnail

> > Mostly OK OC Thread Thu 31 Jul 2014 21:15:50 [No.19022098](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19022098)
> 
> > Anonymous Fri 01 Aug 2014 20:36:48 [No.19037499](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19037499) 307
> > Pony.png, 27KiB, 830x650
> > Well... Here's my OC. What do you guys think?
> 
> > Jessy Fri 01 Aug 2014 21:16:48 [No.19038086](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19038086) 311
> > >>19037499
> > The color scheme could use some work, and the hairstyle is very common with ocs. Are you open to someone tweaking the design?
> > 
> > Also, does she have a name, personality and a hobby?
> 
> > Anonymous Fri 01 Aug 2014 21:32:03 [No.19038267](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19038267) 316
> > >>19038086
> > I'm open to someone tweaking her a bit. I wanted the color scheme to seem a little soft on the eyes, some ocs seem to have very harsh colors. I don't know if the green eyes work too well.
> > 
> > As for the mane, I wanted her to have a more flowy style, and the pony generator didn't have too many choices.
> > 
> > I don't exactly have a name yet, but as for personality and hobby, I was thinking she could do something a musical, since I enjoy writing songs and stuff. I wanted her personality to be similar to that of a upper crust Manehatten or Canterlot pony... She doesn't enjoy getting hot and sweaty, to say the least
> 
> > Jessy Fri 01 Aug 2014 21:48:04 [No.19038490](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19038490) 321
> > >>19038267
> > Alright, I'll try to work something out. The body in this is grey. Would you prefer any other colors or would an off white work better for you?
> 
> > Anonymous Fri 01 Aug 2014 21:51:58 [No.19038566](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19038566) 324
> > >>19038490
> > I always envisioned her having a silvery color, I know grey is a little bland. Off white would be ok, though I still like the idea of a shiny silver coat.
> 
> > Jessy Fri 01 Aug 2014 21:58:18 [No.19038662](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19038662) 325
> > >>19038566
> > When trying for a silver color, try a very light blue-ish grey. Just as gold is a mixture of yellow and brown, silver is better shown with a slight blue in the grey. I'll sketch up something and add some colors and see which you'd prefer.
> 
> > Anonymous Fri 01 Aug 2014 22:06:01 [No.19038780](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19038780) 327
> > >>19038662
> > Ok, thanks!
> 
> > Jessy Fri 01 Aug 2014 23:57:10 [No.19040220](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19040220) 382
> > oc tweak.png, 112KiB, 584x703
> > >>19038780
> > How's this?
> 
> > Jessy Sat 02 Aug 2014 00:18:56 [No.19040566](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19022098#19040566) 393
> > **oc tweak.png, 110KiB, 561x659**
> > >>19040348
> > I'm very flattered and very glad you enjoy what I did. I made a mistake with the shading on the hair, fixed it.

> > Mostly OK OC Anonymous Sun 03 Aug 2014 08:05:16 [No.19062157](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19062157#19062157)
> > 1406350903134.jpg, 770KiB, 4000x3500
> 
> > Anonymous Mon 04 Aug 2014 03:28:00 [No.19075985](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19062157#19075985) 300
> > >>19075943
> > Name: City Light
> > Cutie mark: neon sign of a mic
> 
> > Anonymous Mon 04 Aug 2014 03:59:10 [No.19076546](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19062157#19076546) 310
> > >>19075985
> > I think City Lights (plural) would sound better.
> 
> > Anonymous Mon 04 Aug 2014 06:45:17 [No.19079239](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19062157#19079239) 374
> > >>19075985
> > I like that idea for a cutie mark
> 
> > Anonymous Mon 04 Aug 2014 07:21:25 [No.19079600](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19062157#19079600) 375
> > >>19079239
> > Thanks wasn't sure you actually read my post up until now
> > >>19076546
> > Yeah that does sound a little nicer
> 
> > Anonymous Mon 04 Aug 2014 07:51:18 [No.19079854](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19062157#19079854) 378
> > >>19079600
> > The name's ok, I just think it'd be a little strange if she was just known as "City" though

> > Not horrible edgy OC thread #4 Anonymous Sun 10 Aug 2014 01:26:23 [No.19178391](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19178391#19178391)
> 
> > Anonymous Sun 10 Aug 2014 15:50:38 [No.19187811](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19178391#19187811) 187
> > 1406938736960.png, 110KiB, 561x659
> > So, here's City Lights. She's a Manehatten pony who earns her money singing... in little dive bars and coffee shops. She isn't really successful. Her cutie mark is neon mic sign. Opinions on the name and cutie mark? Someone suggested them, I'm not too good with names and cutie marks. Would anyone like to draw her?
> 
> > Anonymous Sun 10 Aug 2014 16:52:55 [No.19188434](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19178391#19188434) 204
> > >>19187811
> > What a qt
> > If she showed up in the show I wouldn't even think anything of it, that's how regular she looks
> > And a humble backstory to boot, well done anon
> 
> > Anonymous Sun 10 Aug 2014 17:11:43 [No.19188689](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19178391#19188689) 219
> > >>19188434
> > ty! I must confess, I didn't do the art. She was confined to the purgatory that is PonyCreator until Jessy brought her out.
> 
> > Anonymous Sun 10 Aug 2014 19:38:13 [No.19190762](https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/19178391#19190762) 294
> > New Canvas.png, 562KiB, 1024x1024
> > Finished with this one, mind my numerous fuckups
> > 
> > >>19190470
> > oh, that does look really nice, maybe at some point in the future i'll fix it up with something like that
> > >>3769347t

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