I usually feel bad for Dash. Yes she has her moments, but when it came to the infamous Mare Do Well episode, it felt like the Mane Six were criticizing her for being herself. I think the comic “Alone” fits perfectly about what Dashie felt, feeling flat out betrayed over what the girls did to her.
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Thanks hun. I know. I tried not to use commas and other things like that but personally the grammar mistakes hurt me too. Daring Don’t wasn’t out yet sadly.
Nitpicking: “Outta” is unnecessary eye dialect, and “When you decide not to be lame anymore gimme a call” needs a comma. “The only thing they’ll be calling you is loser” is a slight misquote.
Also, some of those lines are a pretty big stretch; quotes from Mare-Do-Well and possibly Daring Don’t might be better.
Good point; didn’t think to check the date.
Thanks hun. I know. I tried not to use commas and other things like that but personally the grammar mistakes hurt me too. Daring Don’t wasn’t out yet sadly.
Also, some of those lines are a pretty big stretch; quotes from Mare-Do-Well and possibly Daring Don’t might be better.
I could try
Of the Mane 6 yes. I’ve begun her but haven’t finished