@PoppyCock
I don’t blame them honestly, because the way you set up the page before that last one was to intentionally tease people into thinking Sombra would actually do stuff to that guy. That’s exactly the problem I have with webcomic artists, they like to do arbitrary fake outs just because they think they’re being cool while doing it. It pisses me off when they do it, I see it all the time in webcomics, it’s not good writing, and it does nothing but lead the reader astray. If you’re going to end a page with something happening, at least go along with it and not cocktease the reader just for kicks.
Plus the fact that Twilight was stupid as all hell for not even KNOWING that she was being seduced. Maybe if they were just regularly dancing and Sombra was just acting out of pure jealously, that would’ve been more interesting.
Also, when Sombra and his family were threatened by the guy, he just let it slide. Like, really? That’s King fucking Sombra, I’m sure he’d react WAY more violently to a threat like that than how he did.
The comic is now officially scrapped, and the Patreon will be replaced with Patron-Sugggested/Requested oneshot stories consisting of Twibra characters, and MLP in general, as well as FNAF.
Disappointed that the comic is scrapped, even if the story was setting up to be very contrived, the art and general characterisation of ponies was good, it was just the long-term characterisation that had problems.
You didn’t drop any hints to the reader that Enrique was a jackass, so the suddenly transition from blank slate to jackass is jarring, especially since you set him up as the flirty-self-confident-guy trying to impress the queen.
@PoppyCock
Well, so I’ll just imagine that the rest of the comic would be Twilight Sparkle warding off thugs from Mr. Mob Boss, ratting off to Sombra, who them razes the island and creates a forest of heads of gang impaled on crystal pikes, with Mr. Mob Boss cruxified atop a large crystal, so that he can watch his empire burn before his eyes as he dies. The royal couple then go back to the Crystal Empire where they proceed to have bed-breaking makeup sex.
The comic is now officially scrapped, and the Patreon will be replaced with Patron-Sugggested/Requested oneshot stories consisting of Twibra characters, and MLP in general, as well as FNAF.
Okay, I know derpibooru isn’t the exact place for this but I put in a $1 pledge and the comic ends here… I see this image is here and I thought you got to see the rest of the comic with that pledge?
Or is there no rest of it?
Or do I need to pay $5 just to the rest after this?
I’ve been called worse.
And I’m sorry about what I first said. I still think you’re an excellent artist.
Thank you for your opinion, I’ll take it in consideration in the future.
I don’t blame them honestly, because the way you set up the page before that last one was to intentionally tease people into thinking Sombra would actually do stuff to that guy. That’s exactly the problem I have with webcomic artists, they like to do arbitrary fake outs just because they think they’re being cool while doing it. It pisses me off when they do it, I see it all the time in webcomics, it’s not good writing, and it does nothing but lead the reader astray. If you’re going to end a page with something happening, at least go along with it and not cocktease the reader just for kicks.
Plus the fact that Twilight was stupid as all hell for not even KNOWING that she was being seduced. Maybe if they were just regularly dancing and Sombra was just acting out of pure jealously, that would’ve been more interesting.
Also, when Sombra and his family were threatened by the guy, he just let it slide. Like, really? That’s King fucking Sombra, I’m sure he’d react WAY more violently to a threat like that than how he did.
Edited
No, it was deleted because people tried to dictate how the story went, and got pissy when it wasn’t changed to their expectations.
She actually deleted the comic on Tumblr once just because people were asking when it would continue. Pretty narcissistic if you ask me.
Everyone has to start somewhere.
I’m honestly glad this comic is scrapped because the Kayla can’t write for shit.
Disappointed that the comic is scrapped, even if the story was setting up to be very contrived, the art and general characterisation of ponies was good, it was just the long-term characterisation that had problems.
You didn’t drop any hints to the reader that Enrique was a jackass, so the suddenly transition from blank slate to jackass is jarring, especially since you set him up as the flirty-self-confident-guy trying to impress the queen.
Now that, I’d pay my weekly pay-check to see!
Rofl. xD
Well, so I’ll just imagine that the rest of the comic would be Twilight Sparkle warding off thugs from Mr. Mob Boss, ratting off to Sombra, who them razes the island and creates a forest of heads of gang impaled on crystal pikes, with Mr. Mob Boss cruxified atop a large crystal, so that he can watch his empire burn before his eyes as he dies. The royal couple then go back to the Crystal Empire where they proceed to have bed-breaking makeup sex.
The comic is now officially scrapped, and the Patreon will be replaced with Patron-Sugggested/Requested oneshot stories consisting of Twibra characters, and MLP in general, as well as FNAF.
Or is there no rest of it?
Or do I need to pay $5 just to the rest after this?
Sorry ;)
And is something wrong with my english - sorry. :|
Oh wait, since it was me replying to my own comment, then I’m guilty as charged hehe………..Ok, i’ll shut up…….
Lord Boss Crime ? Lol, funny name. Since the tags has oc:Lord Boss Crime, someone must have liked it =P