Thanks for taking the time to write this out dude  
I think the upper body was supposed to be twisted to face the viewer more, but I don’t think I made that consistent enough, so it just feels disconnected from everything. Probably could’ve made it more in-plane with her lower body too. And the arm and elbow I agree with, I don’t think I placed them well enough to show her resting on it.  
This was also after I already decreased her bust too lmao
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Could you give some examples? I struggling with the upper body a bunch here and would appreciate critique.
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This is really cute dude <3
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