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Ok this wasn’t a bad story,kinda bad writing, but the art was great, I know I couldn’t make it better but I just couldn’t enjoy it, I’m sorry but that’s just my opinion, if you make more make sure you think very well of this story because in here, what I could understand is that, you just tried to force feels all over the story without any development.
 
But then again, that’s just my silly opinion what do I know.

@Princess♠Molestia  
nope, me too, even though the art is quite amazing, the scrip isn’t as good and that kills the mood on the story

so now this even hadn’t a story, she just died for the purpose of plot continuity