@Amber
That was another one of my problems with it. It was… Disturbingly similar to a rape fic, moreso than a shipping fic. It’s made clear that Celestia has no choice, so she just basically lets him have his way with her – the “shipping” aspect comes in the form of “BUT SHE STARTED LIKING IT HALFWAY THROUGH”, which I found tacky and poorly written.
That was another one of my problems with it. It was… Disturbingly similar to a rape fic, moreso than a shipping fic. It’s made clear that Celestia has no choice, so she just basically lets him have his way with her – the “shipping” aspect comes in the form of “BUT SHE STARTED LIKING IT HALFWAY THROUGH”, which I found tacky and poorly written.



